• Duenan@aussie.zone
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    26 days ago

    Look on the bright side. Writing more is a lot harder than having to condense and prune an essay.

    What might make it easier for you to condense is it focus on making sure you address the key points and see if you’ve duplicated or waffled on about something.

    Or see if you make an answer to something concise and straight to the point without being too descriptive.

    IE. I walked to my car staring at the sunlight coming down through the clouds, I steadily took my time taking steps slowly to my car and opened the door and sat down then I started my engine and began my journey to the new world.

    Short version: I walked to my car and started the engine and drove off.

    Just make sure if it’s the assignment is asking you to address points that they are addressed and not skipped over.

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      26 days ago

      You’ve got a good point. I don’t think I’ve waffled on much, just done probably 3-4x what was expected. And I’m feeling a little silly since that doesn’t actually do anything for me, and if I hadn’t, I’d be done by now

      I don’t think I want to prune it much, although I’m currently paraphrasing and grammar checking what I’ve written so far, and am removing some stuff for clarity. It might not do anything for me, but it’d be a double wasted effort if I just deleted it all!

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        26 days ago

        The word limit is fairly low as well to answer 12 questions.

        It’s roughly 30 words per question.

        Doesn’t really leave room for an intro or conclusion if you’re sticking to that word limit and if that’s needed.

        I hope that helps a little bit.

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          26 days ago

          Oh! I should have been a bit clearer, this is just a single question. I’d guess most people would answer the entire question in about half the words I’ve used to answer a third of it (but there’s no limit). Although the question is kind of open-ended, so I certainly wouldn’t get in trouble for being as detailed as I am, it’s more just I didn’t have to

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            26 days ago

            AIATSIS protocols, pick one. Try to describe it in less time than drinking a coke.

            Bonus points cite anything by Tui Raven

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              26 days ago

              I’m basically done now. The social issues category became a bit of a rabbit hole, but politics and economics are simpler, or at least, simpler to describe